Thursday, October 28, 2010

my lilac Wine

Visionary ticks of shivering in the
chest
out last
the fading of A Moon's
smile
hanging limply from Dead of Sky

Vast stretches the turmoil of
skin
bubbling by the Boiling
of
once
hauntingly
cool lips.
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousDecember 17, 2010 at 1:07 AM

    I love this.

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  2. AnonymousDecember 20, 2010 at 8:32 AM

    This is a beautiful poem.

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 2, 2011 at 10:13 AM

    I've been checking back now and then, hoping to see more. But perhaps you have finished and begun something else. Let us know.

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  4. AnonymousApril 15, 2011 at 12:02 PM

    Hi, just wondering if you plan to do more work and, if so, if you plan to use a name other than Lewis D. Jackson. Perhaps start a new blog? I would like to see more. Some of "useless song" is very beautiful even when it gets ugly. Some of it I like very much, other parts I don't understand or don't like (it makes me wonder what the hell you were thinking). I think that's good, and that's why I'd like to see more. I've read your blog a few times. It seems like it's being changed in small ways each time I read. Or am I just reading it differently? -Jakalyn-

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